Globalization
is often blamed as the cause of climate change and deforestation. The expansion
of international trade brought about by globalization results in increased economic
activities, which ultimately lead to worsening pollution. Even though globalization
is not the sole factor to be blamed for environmental degradation, it is agreed
that it further aggravates and accelerates the situation. Furthermore, the lack
of commitment and unity in global and local governance make matters worse. The Montreal Protocol proved that joint efforts
between the nations and effective interventions are critical to successfully
curb the challenges of globalisation.
However,
globalisation has its advantages as well. It brings about greater interconnectivity
between nations and promotes the ease of reaching out to a global audience
through online platforms, due to the advancement of technology. As a result, the
public is becoming more conscious of the negative impacts of globalisation and nations
are now actively looking into possible courses of actions to avert the
environmental consequences.
...The expansion of international trade brought about by globalization results in increased economic activities, which ultimately leads(Verb form) to worsening pollution. Even though globalization is not the sole factor to be blamed for environmental degradation, it is agreed that it further aggravate(Verb form) and accelerate(Verb form) the situation. Furthermore, the lack of commitment and unity in global and local governance made(Tense) matters worse. The Montreal Protocol proved that joint efforts between the nations and effective interventions are critical to successfully curb the challenges of globalisation.
ReplyDeleteThe second paragraph is very well written
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ReplyDeleteHello! Thanks for your feedback, I have already edit my verb form and tense errors :)
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